We showed our rough cut to some people in our class and asked them to say features that are good and things we need to change.
Sound: It was effective but the dialogue was drained out by the sound of traffic in the background. Also our actually dialogue was apparently not good, in the way we gave too much away for an opening sequence. So we have cut all this out of our opening sequence and are going to re-film it.
Camera Work: The camera work was very effective, a huge variety of shots and movements were used in a very effective way. The only problem was the shake of the camera when Ricardo enters the school.
Conventions: Follows the mysterious conventions of the Thriller Genre. The strange camera angles make the audeince nervus and on edge. The only concern was the reality of it at times. Such as the dialogue, however we are definately changing this.
Obviously there was no feed back on title sequence as we have not yet completed these on Motion. However they are a working progress and should be completed by the end of the week for our second edit.
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